Our script so far...

Opening sequence for teaser trailer

 

Establishing shot - St. Margaret's church.

Fade in/out of villain over shoulder shot.

Fade in/out of maid.

Cut to black, maid screams.

Cut too maid on the floor covered in blood.

Cut to black 'By the produce of.....'

In comes Sholmes and Jotson.

Sholmes - "What seems to be the problem here?"

Jotson - "Well maybe it's because there's a dead body on the floor Sholmes"

Sholmes - "I have a feelings he was murdered"

Jotson - "Why do you think that?"

Sholmes - "We'll maybe because there's a knife sticking out of her and there's a man covered in blood in the corner"

Jotson - "You do amaze me Sholmes..."

 

Music comes in...

More (TBD)

 

Run through and prediction of what will happen (Sholmes)

Punch/sweep/chop/kick to the ribs

Villain punches Sholmes in the nose and breaks is.

Sholmes - "Why would you punch me in the nose?! Who punches someone in the nose? God damn!"

Rapid cuts between Sholmes, Jotson and the villein.

Zoom out Sholmes, Jotson and the villain sitting at the table.

Villain - "We're going to play a game, don't worry it's fun......."

Sholmes - "WOOO!! BEER PONG!!"

Villain - "No you inbecil, shut up!! But here are the rules.

Rule 1 - NEVER talk about game club.

Rule 2 - Heroes? There are no such thing.

Rule 3 - (Villains name), I am your father.

Rule 4 - If you run, I will find you and I will kill you.

Rule 5 - The names (villains name), (villains name) ."

Jotson - "What you talking about (villains name)?"